Love Me Or Love Me Not

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Love Me Or Love Me Not

Post by That_Kid » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:37 pm

Love me or love me not
It don’t matter anymore
You the girl for me? I don’t know
damn I used to be so sure
You gave it all up cuz you wanted to be single
Left me heartbroken so u cud go out and mingle
I put my trust in you
Put no one above you
I said I love you
and I showed it too
it wernt about the kissin
I wernt bothered bout the flirtin
Aslong as I could have you in my life
So many dreams I built with u as my wife
I could get thru anything with u by my side
Whatever u needed or wanted I was always ready to ride
Stuck by your side
when u was upset
Poured out my heart to u I had no regret
Used to get laughed at, the way I treated you
So loyal, dint flirt, never wanted to upset my boo
You left me weak and heartbroken
2 years of my life just seem so stolen
now I dunt believe any of the words you’d spoken
‘baby I love you’
I wish it was true
I trusted you like no other
Brought u a promise ring sayin we’d be forever
‘Babygirl you can be my queen
50 years later we’ll still be
cuz ent nobody coming inbetween’
dats what I used to say
fed you compliments everyday
showed you loving in everyway
yelled at u at times
apologised by writin u rhymes
but even then I wish u cud see
I was doin it for u
Dint want people thinking bad of u
To me you were more than just a girl
You were my world
You were my everything
It was always ur name my heart would sing
But now those dreams have disappeared
And everything u sed seems like a lie
I feel like I was always the rebound guy
Right now I’m sittin here wishin u were still with me
But its bout time I face reality
You always sed u wanted to be single wen u started uni
What can I say to you
I’d wait forever for u
But wud u wanna get bak together in 4 years time?
After this would you ever want to be mine…?


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Post by Sunnah » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:42 pm

omgshhh wow nabz man ur soo sik witt words i shud no :P nwais she wasnt worth it newai GOOD RIDENCE 2 HER ;) NUFF LUV XX
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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:47 pm

omg kid this is such a brilliant piece uno wat i love most about it? ITS FICTIONAL :D

also i love how its about a guy getting independance from an over-zealous cow and im all up for independance from pressured relationships :)

ok so thats basically wat i think of this.. nice 1 duuude (Y) x

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Post by kikass » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:56 pm

dass some good stuff man,
i dont no ur gal buh ino wat ur goin thru n hw u feel


if your love is jus 1way isit really worth it?
its hard ino n almost seems impossible buh u cnt beat urself ovr summin like this..
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Post by Platinum_Pwincess » Sat Sep 01, 2007 10:58 pm

lmaoo Sunnah. :lol:

Wow..That is really good man, Nicely Done ;)

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woow

Post by paki_prince » Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:03 pm

wow kid das sum sikk lyrics dude

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Post by FaTaL » Mon Sep 03, 2007 12:37 pm

gwan dat was good

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Post by That_Kid » Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:46 pm

thanks for the feedback

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Post by cuzzy » Sat Sep 29, 2007 4:41 pm

nice one :wink:
keep it up :P

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Post by That_Kid » Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:51 pm

lol thanks cuzzy

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Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Sun Nov 04, 2007 2:53 pm

lmao i got this in my phone to read anytime at my leisure =)

honestly every time i read it, it brings shiny stuff to my eyes man :$

Big up you =d x
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