Do You remember...?

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That_Kid
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Do You remember...?

Post by That_Kid » Sun Nov 04, 2007 5:34 pm

i'm tired of pleasin people
im tired of watchin people walk away
im tired of giving my all
just to see them turn away
just tired of trying hard just to fail
tired of gettin with girls that never stick around
tired of listenin hours on end without making a sound
'i love him' i hear her say
'but i love you...' something i cannot say
why did it have to end this way?
do you even remember the day you said you loved me?
i was the guy for you and they'll be no other guy above me?
do u remember the day u said u loved my lips
and i would be your very first kiss
what happened to the dreams we had?
do you remember me staying up till late night when you were sad?
was what we had a pleasant dream for you?
or was it just a bad experience you would never wanna go through?
do you remember how we wanted to spend days on end together?
do you remember? please tell me you remember you promising we'd be forever
do i ever cross your mind?
cuz your all i think about day and night
your smile the way you say my name
and the way you used to tell me you love me
i always said you were too good to be true
a girl like you? with a guy like me??
damn i felt so lucky to have you
but when i fell so hard for you
so deeply in love with you
you left me hanging and turned away
and i'm fallin outta place, i'm goin astray
still thinking why you ended it all
was it something i did or someting i didnt say
i'll never know
but one thing i do know
and the one thing that hurts the most
is knowing i'll never have you ever again
and i hope in ur world the sun is shining
cuz baby in my world theres only rain
to hide my tears that i cry for you
puttin a smile on but still can't pretend that i dont care for you
and i dont know if i should ever say this to you...
but you're still my everything...and i love you..

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Brown Eyed Beauty
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Re: Do You remember...?

Post by Brown Eyed Beauty » Sun Nov 04, 2007 5:41 pm

That_Kid wrote: i always said you were too good to be true
a girl like you? with a guy like me??
damn i felt so lucky to have you
but when i fell so hard for you
so deeply in love with you
Another hard-hitter.. damn u should get these published man I'd buy 'em :$ i love the extract above ^^

Mwaaah x

BTW: If "you're" out there right now reading this, i hope you realise what a gem u've thrown away.
The world's not getting smaller, there's just less in it.

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cuzzy
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Post by cuzzy » Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:12 pm

true say B.E.B he truly is a gem:wink:
poems just get better and better everytime
leave me speechless:shock:
luff em heartfelt meanings
carry on like this and few years time That_Kid gonna be big 8)

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XxPIPxX
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Post by XxPIPxX » Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:25 pm

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, daz sum emotional shit u got there damn! ur gud.

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Post by PollyLop » Sun Nov 04, 2007 6:45 pm

Ooh.. Check you out! I thought you was just a kid :shock:

They some powerful lines you got there.. nice! :)

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